Very well written poem... I liked it alot... I've been through similar situations, and they suck... Just do what your heart tells you to... Check out some of my newer stuff if you want ... 5/5

Wow, this was awesome. You obviously poured your heart out into this. Reguardless of what any of us think, this is a part of you and it obviously means a lot to you, don't forget it.

I love it, I have been through something like this before to. Just listen to what you truely feel. Good job on writing this!

-Josiah

I like it..... to many poeple question love when they shouldnt..... this is a great way to show them not to

I liked this compositions so much :) keep it up :) 5/5

Ah, you sound really happy to be around him. I hope you two get back together. *~Weeping Wolf*~ just got over someone like that if you need someone to talk to. Great poem!

Hm,,, Looks as if someone has stolen you heart, blush. That's good to hear (meaning that I'll probably be seeing more new poems from you). Quite interesting use of the poem scheme, though it seems as if you just wanted all these things off your chest. Great poem, but you probably knew that I was going to say that anyway. Good to hear from you again blush. ^_^x. (plus the edit page doesn't seem to be working...bleh)