H hun a heartfelt piece. very sad em0ti0nal and deep. hun im here f0r u. i think ur an amazing girl jsut thru the p0ems i have read,
keep it up

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Good work, You have a good rhyme scheme and flow.`

Awww thats a really sad poem, so full of emotion. excellently written 5/5 xxx