by Rican Chemistry Jan 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
~Phone Rings~, Talking: |
Excellent poem, I don't see why anyone would down it. I thought it was very good. |
by Cheyanne
Wow thiz is an excellent song/poem i cud tell u put a lot of effort in 2 it n i love ur use of wordz!! well i wish u gud luck wif sellin it coz thiz iz truly worth sellin well newayz juss thought i wud show sum respectz!! n ill b lookin 4 ward 2 readin sum more of ur work!!!5/5 |
I liked it its like my poem stuck on a love maybe you shoukd read it and tell me what you think but its a good song |
by Heidi
I loved it, there seems to be nothing that you should change. I hope that your song gets sold and makes millions... ;D Keep it up |
by Rakesh
Being as good as the LYRICS were I would like to appreciate the PLOT that it unfolds..a very awkward and yet a very realistic and frequent happening. |