This is a really good poem, ive never read a poem like it, the language you used is really effective. i liked it xxxx

Just so ya know, I don't appreciate hearin that I "need help." That poem, "Based On," was just that, based on my new favorite movie. I really took offense to your comment. Also, I would like to let you know that some people really do feel that way, and they most certainly are not messed up. Please do not read my poems anymore unless you are prepared to deal with feelings that are not "all rainbows and butterflies." P.S. To anyone who doesn't know what's oin on, read my poem, "Based On" nd the comment she left and you'll get it.
By thw way, Bleeding Mascara, this is a good poem. It really lets the whole site know how you feel without you having to publicly criticize their feelings.

I think you really hit home with what you wrote my gf died and left her family and me to grieve. even though we weren`t together at the time i never stopped loving her. so now i write my poems i hope that she knows how much she was loved

Very powerful keep it up...

Fu.k..that was really good,for real..a few of ur lines i have said in mine..i always think its a trip when i read something i hav wrote like,it catches my attiontion..i dono n e way great poem.. thanx for comenting on mine..u should check my others out.. stay writeing..and stay up. im out

Beautifully done. i love all your work!

Wow that was touching and great. keep writing.

Its all good... dont worry bout it, didnt really think much of it in the first place. Im the one who owes you an apology because of the fact that you were giving some advice and not being offensive. Dont worry about it, your a great poet, and i love your work, thank you for your comment...

Great poem . You were right this poem can have more then one meaning . Your and excellent writter . I actually read the whole thing..lol,, thanks for the comment and keep up the good work .

Letty

First, I wanted to say thanks for commenting on my cream puff poem... i love getting comments, and you were the first one!
second, your poem shows true emotion and i like it. keep it up, but try remember that happy poems are what keep a person going, keep them trucking on. you've gotta live happy and write happy to be happy.
while i agree it's good to express your feeling, living in misery won't get you far. love, laugh, and live. find out why you're here on purpose; don't come across it by accident.

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I Luved Your Poem....Iz So Full Of Emotions!

I really liked this poem, love the way you write! keep it up

oh and thanks for the comment on my ones :)

This is so good. I have never read a poem like this one before and it made me want to read it again. 5/5