Existential You

by Drew Gold   Jan 7, 2006


If words were the same as intent, I'd suspend your every expression
in mid-air.

You're free
to take a picture
but leave your reflection at the door.

the world's already a dirty enough place without You
misconstruing truth
and selling it by
the milligram.

confusing faith,
and pulling it
from underneath god's fingernails,
back into Your mouth-
A child's-birth, re-
versed.

If word equalled intent
I wouldn't be writing this-
wouldn't be staring in
through the gap between
letter and full sentences.

Don't you feel
what I want,
between 'u' and 's',
Anyway?

I wouldn't be wondering
what it is that You're talking about
because thought
removed from intention
would tell its own story

make its own pictures,

live its own life,

taking no prisoners.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    This poem was so good man.

    "confusing faith,
    while pulling it
    from underneath Your god's fingernails,
    back into Your mouth-
    A child's-birth, re-
    versed."

    "I wouldn't be wondering
    what it is that You're talking about
    because thought
    removed from intention
    would tell its own story

    make its own pictures,

    live its own life,

    taking no prisoners. "

    I really liked those parts but the whole poeam was very attention grabbing and you hid the menaing in a very interesting way.

    great job.