Did You Ever Love Me Like You Said

by confused!! (Jenn)   Jan 7, 2006


You said you loved me
How did i fall for that?
You said you never cheated
Thats why your not home
You said u would never let me fall
Well I hit rock bottom
You said you would give up your life for me
thats not the case anymore is it
Your out with my best friend and I'm suppose to wait 4 u like I have noting better to do
Well in that case I'm out the house
As for you and my best friend your out my life

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  • 18 years ago

    by Maria

    Wow! jen this is the first of ur poems i read and u have great talent hun keep writing ! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, i no how u feel same thing happened to me. u did the right thing his not worth it and u much better than him. i like the fact that u contradict what he said to u in the poem, goes well with wt happened and the name of the poem and tho it doesn't rhyme it has a certain flow to it. good work. i'm giving it a 4. i think for a 5 you could have maybe made it a bit longer to fully brong across not just what happened but your feelings. take care.

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