Hey, this is really good. It gets confusing, but when you take the time to read it, you understand fully.

5/5

From what i read, its one of your best, and you have some great poems!! so keep it up, i guess a lot of people can relate to this poem

Well, its lovely. I find it a very personal poem. It lets those see the side of someone they may not take the time to look at as you describe through this poem. Excellent job.
xoxo

I really liked it...it was really deep..and even though it was from five years ago it was still wonderful, better than what i write now and how ill ever write ..keep it up :D
-Ashley

I am lost for words . This is beyond excellent, magnificent, or wonderful . You really touched my heart with this poem . I am sorry that you had to go through something like that . I too know how it feels to be looked upon as if your worthless or a plague . But I like you also learned to deal with it in my writting, alone . You say this is not one of your best pieces . But I'm sorry to say ( and I hope this dose't offend you ), but you sir are a liar . Because this is beyond the best . You should always give yourself more credit then anyone else will give you . I think I just gave you a reason to be arrogant . lol. Also for a person with a learning disorder, you write better then me .

Keep writting your brilliant poetry hunny . Because you now have a crazed fan .

Love ya
Letty xoxo

Very deep and thoughtful....i love it hah 5/5

You confuse me, this poem is wonderful! It really hit home for me, and i could really feel the emotion from it. The line

"get a job" they will shout,
don't they think that i would,
if i could?"

It just got to me and the lines
"mothers drag their children away,
tell them to keep their distance,
as if i am dangerous,
I am no different to them,"

Those lines are so real that it felt as if you took the words right out of my mouth. Funny thing is, i seen that happen all the time, mothers pulling there children close as if we hold some sort or spreading virus.

It happened to me a while ago when i too ran away from home; some just walk by as if your nothin but a crack in the road while other look at you with pity but when they turn the corner they completly forget.

*sigh* I'm sorry that you have to go through that as well. Anyway just wanted to say that this poem is great, such depth. 5/5 you totally desever it. Keep it up! Take Care!
~Luvz~
~Chica~

I loved it..keep up the good work
i like your writing sooooo much

I dono if you got my private message but incase you didn't just wanna say i wanna get ur e-mail coz i think i can learn alot of stuff from you.............thats if you wanna

So true its weird..
I can relate to this poem alot
Because i get that alot..
This is an excellent poem
You have a huge amount of talent
Got a 5 from me
xlestat