by ღ*KiM*ღ Jan 7, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A notebook Jotting |
by Imogen
Great start, I partically love the first verse 5/5 so far, but I'll wait till it's finished to vote ;) |
by Jessica
This was good.. all the syllable counts work.. but haiku's are traditionally about nature.. this was good though.. 5/5 |
I really like it so far. |