True darkness:

by Passionate   Jan 7, 2006


I'll find a razor when i get home,
and then I'll be gone into true darkness to roam.
I'll sit there with blood on my hands,
the proof there is no one who is called a good man,
no one to stand up for me.
alone, finally alone I'll be.
maybe then he'll see what he did to me,
maybe at my funeral I'll see one
true friend.
is it really to much to ask just to be loved,
not to be wrong,
not to be called names and questioned?
not to make a mistake?
it's just too much to take.
when i finally go too far,
is that when they'll see what they really are?
will they ever see, i was never mean?
eventually i will fall into true darkness,
and it will be better when I'm alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant peice.
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    by Iola

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    With your poem it's clear that you despise people who dissapoint you.. but your sacrifice may be to big..

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