Vary good and if you need to talk i'm here ok well vary nice keep it up!

Wow..gorgeous poem..I LOVED IT!! it was really deep and i love those type of poems.. thx for commenting my poem and i took ur advice it actually sounds a lot better now. well if u can view more of my poems cause i have a variety of them.. i have read a few of ur poems and ur a really good writer!!! keep it up!!

Hi, thx for your comment on my poem...

With your poem it's clear that you despise people who dissapoint you.. but your sacrifice may be to big..

Brilliant peice.
5/5

btw. i think your a brilliant writter. all your poems are very expressive and deep.