Another great poem!!! I loved this poem as its its different than the ones i usually read but it had such a powerful message within it. I could imagine someone rapping this so clearly lol and the ending..........the ending was out of this world.... *thumbs up* you did a great job on this one keep it up
luv jess xoxo

I am speechless! you should really get this published as a song. you should rap it, or something! if i could give you a ten i would! wow, i gues that i wasn't so speechless!

Another great poem. I love it! I'm afraid that one day my brothers gonna end up dead and not come home. It a fear, just thinking about it. Another poem im gonna have to show him. Keep up the great work. I lvoe your poems.

Ur rhyming skillz are tight, I love the way you flow it just makes me wanna read more, so here i go reading more of your poems.........

I love this poem. It shows an emotion that I totally relate to. I live in a "ghetto" kinda town, & it's ridiculous what people do to try to be thugs & all. It sounded like a rap though. ( in a good way) like, my cousin is in this band Soul Somatic, which is a Christian group, they describe themselves as "hip-hop with hard guitars", && it sounds like a song they would do. I don't know, I'm wierd! lol. Well I will ttul. buh-byeez! ; ]

A very excellent meaningful poem....i think everyone should read this poem to make them think...i love it!!!...keep it up...
~Sandra~