by Jonathan Jan 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I can see it, but it is out of my reach |
by Sole
Your concept of love is great. The way you write the poem is greater. The impact on the reader after the poem is beyond greatness! I loved your poem :) |
by Emma
You have accurately grasped love...this is great : ) |
by shannon
Aww that was so good nice job hun 5/5 |
by Alex Marlatt
Good poem, I liked the last stanza alot |
by Gretchen
Long I have wanted no e. The one thing in Life not live I ever fought for. I hold it in my hand not holds. I liked the poem it was different and unique. Good job |