Aw this is a really sad poem, sad but powerful, you seem like you have alot of potential, keep up the great work, your poem is just dazeling, if you have time mabye check out some of mine, if you want.
AmAzInG WoRk!~!
Megan

Wow, that was really good. It was short but you got your point across in a really intersting way. Keep the amazing job up and you will go far.
~Julie Harris~
aka Juls

That was a realli good poem. thx for your comemnt too sorry it tok me so long ot reply, im hardly on the net but when you told me tht i was so shocked its guys and things like that tht make me hate this world so...your so talented too you deserve better than you got