Lets Start on a posiive note.....the poem is good on a level where I *as the reader* and place myself in your shoes and understand what your going through with your words.

The only thing i had basically following is the flow of the poem. I would get a flow going, but then the rhythem would change...I am actually very impressed your 14 and have these stong words within your expressions.

I Started at age 11, so you def have what it takes....Def makes me want to read on to some of your other pieces.

Beautifully put. I don't know EXACTLY how you feel, but I've been in similar circumstances.