To me this piece provides a prayer like atmosphere. The sort of convesation we would have to our selfs after something devasting happens. I can relate to subject of this poem on some level which made the message cleaer.

Keep writing
Nici

You did a great job, this poem is full of feeling.

But when we shed tears
For those who shared
Life within our own years
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that was the best part to me, it just seems to hit a nerve and make me think. I have lost some people my age that were close and its hard. Great work hun and keep it up

This powerful poem made me think of a quote that went someting like this.. that no matter how fast light is it always has darkness waiting for it. The poem seems to reflect from true experience. I pray that this poem encourages many to seek the light of life. God bless you