Cant Promise Nothing Will Change

by ѕуиєявσу   Jan 8, 2006


Why does love strike at inappropriate times
and why do people say love makes you blind
because i found the greatest girl that i could find
i was not blinded no its opened my eyes
together forever is such a long time
and to promise that to you i guess i would be lying
but i promise to you there will always be
a space in my heart where its just you and me
where time and distance no longer exist
and we can be one and live happy in bliss
an image so clear a picture so crisp
cos girl your every thing i have wished
for once in my life i am truly at peace
when i was with you my mind was so free
but thoe we are apart for now together were still
in my heart in my soul there you always will
be there to comfort me like i comfort you
thoe i can not truly help i try my best when your blue
so until we are able to meet up again
my heart still longs for you and our love stays the same

dedicated to lauren steven...

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ok i am bein nice lol..no rly DUDE this was so INCREDIABLY amazing i dont kno why peeps dotn read ur stuff...its wow UR SO FLIPPN GOOD. One of the best on this site, i think...WOW

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Hey, thanks for the comment :) 5/5 for sure! it's cute. keep it up

    heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by Leeraina

    Good job! i like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... great writing. The rhyming pattern of it was excellent and the whole poem was so romantic... I hope that things work out in the end, and I'm glad that you aren't giving up on this person. great writing~

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