by ѕуиєÑвσу Jan 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Why does love strike at inappropriate times |
Ok i am bein nice lol..no rly DUDE this was so INCREDIABLY amazing i dont kno why peeps dotn read ur stuff...its wow UR SO FLIPPN GOOD. One of the best on this site, i think...WOW |
by Heidi
Hey, thanks for the comment :) 5/5 for sure! it's cute. keep it up |
by Leeraina
Good job! i like it. |
by TinyDancer46
Wow... great writing. The rhyming pattern of it was excellent and the whole poem was so romantic... I hope that things work out in the end, and I'm glad that you aren't giving up on this person. great writing~ |
Loooooooooooooooooooooool |