Hey
Long time no hear!! I have been away for a while, good to see when I come back a new poem from you. Happy to see you writing. This poem was very sweet, underneath very sad and true. Flowed beautifully. I look forward to reading more from you.

Your friend
Hayle

Awesome! I really like this, it's an interesting piece. Unlike anything I've ever read.
Take care and keep it up~Holly