Great poem, i know how it feels to be too far, it's like a hunger that never goes away, anyways good job n keep on writin'

I can reaally understand what you're goining through. I know for sure that you'll be ok, because you know that you must go on with your own life, so I don't have worries=)
Keep writing your feelings down, it can help you lay down your bagage..

It is good keep it up i like it