Wow, thats incredibly good-that line that says "i thought hed be back" i like that alot-muh boyfriend jus recently moved n he says that too- this will prolly be the poem i read if he never does- he was muh first tru love too-well ne ways- ur great @ writin n good job
peace
.:Angelina:.

Hi there,, great poem,, i really liked it, alot!! feel free to get ur emotions out,, it will make u feel better,,,:-)
what u could try do,, is to rhym better,, but hey thats just me,, if rhyming is not ur thing, thats cool too,, best of luck**;-)
**doz an1c me?**

Great work once again, you have alot of talent. Keep it up.