The competition. (Senryu)

by Steven Beesley   Jan 8, 2006


This one is for you guys, you know who you are ha ha ha! Should be read in conjunction with CC&P photos to you for maximum impact!!!

The competition:

Our competition,
bow down, kiss our hairy butts.
You know who you are.

Senryu:
Japanese style short poem for of 3 lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5. Usually on a personal or funny subject (not about nature). Does not usually rhyme.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    LMAO...... great one Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    LMFAO I didn't hear about this poem...I'm always left out...I'm glad I came across it...HAHAHAHAHAHA Very niiiiicceeeeeee....lol thanks for the laugh HAHAHA

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really love your ability to tackle all sorts of styles. You impress me my friend. I am learning so much from you. Thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    HAHAHA...j/k I ain't laughing.

    great stuff but EOP rocks!! better luck next time guys. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Hilarious! I think if yall spent more time writing, maybe just maybe you would be worth our time competitively! Hahahaha, j/k! I love you guys!
    Oh and beautiful poem, Stephen! Very nice, but a bit too much information for me :) Take care~Holly

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