Comments : The competition. (Senryu)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely done Steve, but I don't really see them as competition....more like the annoying little brother with glasses sliding down his nose....the one that won't leave you alone to have a good time and always wants to tag along....

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Ha ha ha ya you tell Sunny we'll enjoy kissing her hairy butt! as long as you like to lick our toes clean... great poem steven i actually feel this should be in the funny section!

    ~the compitition is on!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    There ain't no competition... We'll consider our butts already kissed!!! Superb writing Bill, very funny!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Great job, love it! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Steven
    Hahaha A kick butt poem.... loved it.

    Love ya, Ann~

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Hilarious! I think if yall spent more time writing, maybe just maybe you would be worth our time competitively! Hahahaha, j/k! I love you guys!
    Oh and beautiful poem, Stephen! Very nice, but a bit too much information for me :) Take care~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    HAHAHA...j/k I ain't laughing.

    great stuff but EOP rocks!! better luck next time guys. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really love your ability to tackle all sorts of styles. You impress me my friend. I am learning so much from you. Thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    LMFAO I didn't hear about this poem...I'm always left out...I'm glad I came across it...HAHAHAHAHAHA Very niiiiicceeeeeee....lol thanks for the laugh HAHAHA

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    LMAO...... great one Steve