Wow this is really different than anything i've read on this site. keep up the good work 5/5

Oh my...you must've been really angry..teenage angst, haha. very well written hun. different, but a good different, I love it. Keep it up. check out some of my stuff too, im not very good, hoping you can give me some advice. xoxo thanks

Amazing. I absolutly love it! Gruesome yes, but its better than doing other things to take care of the anger. =)

a noose could never replace
your laughter, your lips
if words could kill
then i wrote this for you.

that stanza and the last two lines of the poem. My favorite. It just ties in all the anger and gives me a look upon someones face like you wouldn't believe. Excellent job.
xoxo

Curiosity killed the child
Pandora will regret this later.

I love it.....it sounds really weird but its true, i thought this was unique and different. I liked the story aspect too. I think it would make a cool song. Take care XXXXX
JL

Wow! Definitely different than most of your stuff, but none the less amazing. As usual the last part was my favorite, great job!

I like this line Lala
if words could kill
then i wrote this for you.
You should totally make it a quote
What guy broke your heart lala?
I'll get him for you, k?

Whoa LaLa!!! niiice!
haha. the right expression i would use
too if i was really bad at someone!!
haha.
awesome poem. i just love the title!
"tainted artist"

This was a long-ass poem! but i have to say, i did NOT want it to end!!! you sure have some evil in you! good thing you release it with your pen on paper!! haha
Layla... this poem is BRILLIANT!!

Love the power, the passion, poem. GREAT job!!! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

I have mixed emotions about this poem because it was unbelievable MORBID but to a certain extent powerful in words. I really did like the the last two lines...those gave my chills but still it was kinda disturbing, you now? lol...anyways, I honestly wish the rest was the same kind of powerful as those last two lines. Because killing someone with words to me says a lot more than the physical aspect of it. But I have to say you do have writing talent. Keep it up, just tone it down, =)
~Midnight Sun