Really good duno what to say

For the carnival kissses
for the unwanted agony
for the ungranted wishes
from the black fairy

total gorgy!!!
soooo cool! loved it so much! 5/5
wow, awesome
ashes eternal

I loved it! Especially the end great poem! Keep it up!

OMG, who r u kidding, u r the 1 that is gud in writing dark poems, although it's short, but I like it, very much indeed, I wrote the poem with the help from a friend lol, dun really hev a wide imaginary, but yea, I do hope can make more dark poems, juz hope it won't be that bad...hee...well, ur an asian 2, not bad, hardly see any asians here lol...nice meeting ya...=)

Short And sweet completely decribes this poem! Well done! i Love The last stanza! Very strong imagry again for me!
Well done!
Love Mel

Very interesting, unique and greatly written. Atmosphere is superb and wording is also excellent. Last stanza is my favorite one. I really enjoyed in this piece. It deserves 5/5

Another gr8 poem!!
I liked this poem alot!!
Take care =)
5/5

Unique, love the ending