Well done, its amazing... never put the blame on yourself cos of a guy. happened to me a lot, and i can relate to it at times too... well done...

Brilliant poem, its long but at no point does it alow yuo to wander off or whatever... it really captures you. you wrote it very well.

robert is right, dont blaime your self becuase of a lad, its not worth it. it will hurt that your not with him, but it is in no way your fault.

Amazing poem hunni, its so good and i can relate to parts of it. i wish he wasnt like that but its only coz he looks up to adam n thinks hes the best n trys to show off in front of him. i hope ur ok, im always here for you. xxxxxxxx

Hun this was so sad but cute at the same time amaing job i love it. keep your head up. hope the best for you. 5.5

Very nice poem click on my name i have alot of sad love poems cuz i myself am mending a brokenheart keep ya head up and keep writing itll make u feel better