Comments : Dead from the start

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is seriosly an amazingly brilliant poem. you are a very good writer. the feelings are so strong and the rhyming flows perfectly. superb poem, really.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Halu stranger,

    This was an astonishing poem. It had such raw emotion in it and it was just so well expressed. Excellent job 5/5

    Take Care-
    stargazer38