One of those days where the world goes to hell all around you leaving you standing in a pool of lava consuming you away. Yeah, I know those days.

-Tainted mikochan

Oh babes, I havent been commenting but i'll make it up to you i promise. I love the poem but am so so worried about you. I have been really poorly so not really been commenting on many poems at all. You'll always have me in your heart. Me and you against the world hunny! ok???

Please dont, from everyone that cares, you can make it hunn....keep writting -xxx-

0h what a l0vely p0em
so touching and sad!!!!
hOPE you're alright ;)
t.c
Lov
Nema x0xx0x

Sabrina, wot's wrong, talk 2 me if u r sad, well, I'm always here 4 u...remember that...miss u so much girl...

I really liked this one too. your poems really make me miss her, but its all kool. i like you stuff, its good. and you really do have some talent.

Brilliant peice, so much feeling within it and very well written

Sabrina, this was amazing! So well written... but please tell me this isn't true. Just hang in there. I know you can make it through. I'm always here if you want to talk... you know that. Take care... and be strong.

~ Tina

I love this poem because it relates to me and i thought my words couldnt be potrayed this well but ur poem as done so..
-cherish

Awesome poem.

Its sad..i hope its not u
i like it..good details

Its sad..i hope its not u
i like it..good details

But you will be able to watch so much better from here than from above, didn't you know?

-Tainted Mikochan

Way to get your feelings out without being over dramatic...Comment on some of mine.

Beautiful work.. i hope you don't mean it. although i don't know you personally, i can tell you for sure, that you will be missed by many.
you're a great writer, and this site wouldn't be the same without your poetry.
good luck, and God bless.

Nice Poem. ^^

This is a wonderfullll poem.
i love it

Hi how are you i understand your pain and i pray that you find your way also if its not to late please don't try nothing dum i don't know you but if you need someine to talk to call me at 248-854-2503 and i will be glad to help you god bless you great poem

I hope you are ok

however this is a very good poem, beautifully organized and wonderfully written
i am sure alot of people, including me, are able to relate to the feelings you so creatively showed
well done

This poem is so beautifully spoken yet dark..i love it