by The Poetic Child Jan 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Society is Getting Bad |
by FoundHim
You would make a very good motivational speaker...i loved it loved it loved it lol...excellent...i bet i could give you a topic about anything and you could write a poem about you are just that good.....very excellent!... |
Vrry good illustration...... |
by Jasonsboo
That was a great poem. It reminds me of my brother. He's in a gang and when he comes home he's always got bruises or is in some sort of trouble. So I really take this poem into consideration. Im gonna have to show my brother this poem sometime! |
by Justin
I was going to say the same thing as Leanna. This would make a really good song. You have talent, and I think you did a good job, keep up the good work. 5/5 |