Good poem i like it

It's okay hun, I get lost in my poems all the time. That is part of it, just going for the writing and let the words flow out however the feel like it. Good poem, even if the meaning was a bit jambled, this way people can find their own meaning for it.

-Tainted Mikochan

I got lost in the vocabulary lmao, you have gotten the best vocabulary of anyone i know, even better than mine lol, i amm like in love with your poetry hun, keep on writing, your words are like dimonds, it would be wrong not to share hehe

I too was lost in your words, the meaning may not be clear to you, but it is important to let the words out, they need to be heard.
Very deep, well done as always.
*VioletRaven*

Haha, no wonder I'm confused 2, sorry lol, don't really get it, but the words u use, is amazing...

Wow. Im gonna need to read that over and over but that was so deep..thats not the right word..but i cant find one that will come close to justifying it.
You are simply the best.
Much love
oxxoxo

Wow, there were sum brilliant words and descriptions in there. it was slightly comfusing, i read it through twice! but i think once u get into it, u do kind of get lost in the words! but anyway, it was amazing as always!
take care,
xxEmxxxx

Well, lucky for you poetry isn't about clarity ;). Personally I think this was an excellent poem. It made me think about it from the beginning and if you can draw a person in that well, than it is quite impressive. Not to seem rude, but you're right I wasn't expecting much out of you in th way of poetry; but I mean it when I say I am genuinly impressed. I have no complaints and hope to see more of your stuff. Amazing job!

Haha. wow. gotta love not knowing wut u're writing about. Awesome poem. of course I don't get it either ..but heyy..do i get N E thing u say?

This is really cool. I like it. :)

Sometimes our greatest work comes from us when we are lead by our emtions and feelings and flow instead of a topic or idea. The way you write always surprised me, because your discriptions are crazy and really paint an image in my mind as read. As Always I love your poems! Huggles to ya!

-Mikochan

Thats reli deep, well done

*5/5*..strong meaning

luv,
Noziyna

Wow, I can tell you got lost, but you got lost very beautifully, deep stuff. 5/5! That was amazing.

Matt do i even exist n e more? You havnt read n e of my new poems or n e thing or commented. well. i still love ya.
--dorkothy

Lol how can you write somthing that confuses you but i guss it is posable i have done it.