Awww, this almost made me cry, awwww, this is amazing, you must've gotten like an A+++++ on it, its fantastic hunnn you rock this poem rocks everything is rocks woo

This is good for something you really dont like. its the 1st i have read by you and i think its very good

Y dont u like it?

i thought it was amazing..ill comment again later sorry i have to go.
mwa xoxo

Well i hope u get a top grade for that coz it was...AMAZING!! cant say its one of my favourites, but still it was pretty damn good! lol. 5/5! keep up the great work hun xxxxxxx

I liked it even if you don't I liked it quite a bit I'll comment more latter

I must say the poem was an excellent response to a Language Arts assignment
The poem must have been inspired, and you do have talent

"Look into these eyes, now,
And tell me what you see,
Just another sorrow?
A captured bird gone free?"

^nice. you have a way with words... excellent and beautiful flow! its just something about the last stanza that doesn't seem to fit properly, frankly confusing... maybe its just me...

keep up the good work! you truly are a talent (if you were looking for a more in depth comment, am sorry.)

Ok..so back again as promised..and i loved this poem all over again.
even just what it represents..it's really sweet matt.
How are things with you atm?
feel like i havent talked to u in a while, which is pretty insane cos i guess we never did..
o god..here i go, rambling on again.
much love
xxoxox
PS: working on that happy poem for you..taking a while..but ill get there!!

GOOD POME
AMAZING
loved it!

The first 2 stanzas were the best, but all really good, although it's possible to tell that it was kind of forced, not quite up to your usual standard, but stil a 5/5 for lack of a 4.9!
Luv Helen xxx

Well for a hated topic and blasted project I think this is pretty damn good. Well done=) Im sorry it took me so long to comment back, Its been a long and stressful couple of weeks. Im blown away by your poetry and Look forward to more, -hugs- Keep it up Hunny

Love always
Jenn-aka-Pure Silence