Please Don't leave....Yet

by ~*Beautifully Broken*~   Jan 8, 2006


One bad day,
Can make a person want to die, but please hold on,
at least until it's both of our time's to go,

I don't want to be left alone in this cruel world,
Ya I may be a hypocrite for saying this,
but please stay,
I want you to leave with me,

I am scared,
what if I'm not going to heaven?
I don't want to go to hell,
I have already been through it on earth,
at least it felt like it,

Please God I want to go to your kingdom,
not the Devils,
I don't want him to take me,
Ya i have given into sinful things,
but i believe in God.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Welcome back to the site. I like your poems hun they have a message and feeling, so I give them 4/5. The one things that would make it a 5/5 is emotion and discriptions of them. You have really good topics, but it feels like the poems don't tap into the depths of them. The deep pain, sorrow, fear, love, discouragement. Still really good poems, so please don't take offense because I really don't mean it in a rude way. Best of luck baby!

    -Tainted Mikochan

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