Another excellent poem. you put so much emotion in it.
**lisa**

The last line "how in struggling"
Should in me im? Just putting that out there. xD
But good job

Nice job, full of emotion, ur a great writer... 5/5
cari

Some powerful words in a short space. Well-written.

Keep writing
Nici

Amazing poem
short but beautiful...I loved it
xxxx keep it up

Great poem, well written flows well and emotion in every word. 5/5

Hey this is a really good poem can you please rate my poem feeling thanx ill read more of yours thier good

Wow.. this was great.. you are such a talented writer... i will continue reading more of your beautiful poems.. keep it up

sammie

One of the best poems i've ever read! keep up the good work and thankyou for reading my poem. Very much appreciated! :)

I love how you put this all together it goes perfect... You did and excelent job.... keep it up!!!

Marie