Comments : Through your Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow Avellana...this poem really makes sense to me. I have been feeling a lot like this, and I love this poem. It is as if you are writing what I want to write but can't seem to put in words. Amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg...*jaw drops*
    this was such a sad poem girl..
    i liked every verse but this one really stood out
    "I know it's my fault that I'm here
    But I just can't find the light
    I'm stumbling in the darkness
    While losing the will to fight"

    so goddam true.
    Im in the exact same position, and i couldn't have written it better.
    So im not sure what to tell you, only that maybe things will get better..and its a worth a try to find out..
    Take care
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i loved the poem! i could really relate to it.. it was really sad but still really good.. If u ever just wanna talk about anything just holler at me anytime..
    Stay strong and dont give up..
    EJ

    Ps. thanks for the comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow that was reallly a good poem. One of the best Ive read in a while. So much emotion put into it. Keep it up. xxx