Comments : Ugly On The Inside

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Hmm...

    I like it... it's a different twist on something original. Wasn't too blow out your brains amazing, but it was still good.

    I'll read your other poem as well, but I won't have time to comment...

    This poem was...good. A high four.

    Please, don't take offense, I liked it. And keep writing, it's a great thing. Keep it up.

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, great work. This poem has good emotion and a great rhyme scheme.