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by Matters
Hmm... I like it... it's a different twist on something original. Wasn't too blow out your brains amazing, but it was still good. I'll read your other poem as well, but I won't have time to comment... This poem was...good. A high four. Please, don't take offense, I liked it. And keep writing, it's a great thing. Keep it up. Matt
by Little Dot
Wow, great work. This poem has good emotion and a great rhyme scheme.