Lauren,
This is a really great poem, it sounds like something that I am going through right now
But good job I like it

Omg dont think this poem is bad its so cute and i think it just inspired me to do something. and serious speaking now, dont cut urself. its so bad for u and things always get better. trust me ive gone through it all. kk pleez comment on my poems !

Laura

That was great i could really feel the pain in that poem and espically for a first poem it was great :D:D
lots of love xxALLYxx

Awww i had tears in ma eyes:'( gr8 job expressing yrself though..if u get time can u check out a few of ma poems...im da bestest riter but aye i try lol ...luv dia mwaz xoxo

Great poem....basically want happened w me and my bf

I love it.. Hey im going threw the same thing about having someone leave you and not being over them .. Like you said in your profile.. well i love it please check out my poems..

~!*Meaghen~!*
~!*FallenTears~!*

Though you said it was your first poem i found it real good i've seen you've written alot more poems and there all real good. im a beginner in writing poems to. but from what i can tell your a really good writer. keep up the good work