Didnt you know

by Lauren   Jan 8, 2006


Didnt you know
what you could do
if you said those words
\"i dont love you\"?
didnt you know
that she would be hurt
if she saw you flirt?
didnt you know
she would be there
late at night
with that knife?
well now you know.

** again, its short but i just started writing poems

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Good for the start of what looks to be talent. Despite its shortness and the ending which is missing something it was good. Nice start and as mentioned above this is beginning to look like some talent.
    ~Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Wow even though dis is lyk yr second peom or sumfin its still gwd...luv dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by cassanova

    Hey lauren i feel just like u my x lives across the street and she keeps poping in my life and i cant let go maybe u would like my poems email me if u want maybe we could help eachother