STILL

by myshiningstar14   Jan 8, 2006


In the fire of the moment, I'm forever burned with the grief and pains of my past.
Terrifying fears,
trembling thoughts,
distant memories,
fearful sounds,
lost chances,
horrific pain,
determined heart,
and a stream less
end of tears.

Still these memories are apart of me. For they cannot be erased from my inner self-existance. Deeper still, we notice:
Corrupt hearts, demolished by the sinners realm of glory;
crushed dreams,
lost faith,
defined scars,
a broken heart
and a trampled life.
Still I must go on. I must overcome the obstacles of life.

*i wrote this some time in 04, i jsut found it so enjoy.* LISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Very nicely done, Lissa. I love the inspirational message it portays. Still after everything life goes on and you must too. Beautifully written.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is good, the pace keeps the reader interested thoughout and the expression is ver y good

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was a great poem. it was fast paced and very straight forward and strong. very well put together. i was never with anyone named sarah?

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Great...it's good...

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Lol its amazing the things you find..i think this poem is kinda horriable but yeaa lol. enjoy non the less. LISSA