by myshiningstar14 Jan 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the fire of the moment, I'm forever burned with the grief and pains of my past. |
by Cuddles
Very nicely done, Lissa. I love the inspirational message it portays. Still after everything life goes on and you must too. Beautifully written. |
This is good, the pace keeps the reader interested thoughout and the expression is ver y good |
by aaron c s
That was a great poem. it was fast paced and very straight forward and strong. very well put together. i was never with anyone named sarah? |
Great...it's good... |
Lol its amazing the things you find..i think this poem is kinda horriable but yeaa lol. enjoy non the less. LISSA |