I LOVED this, it is my favourite of your's so far.
I loved the flow, the wording, the imagery, I thought everything was perfect!

This poem seems you have a lot to say.. and that you had a lot to get out.. the emotion is strong however.. parts are cliche and there were numerous flowing problems towards the end of the poem..

Not to shaby, it lost me in a couple places and trailed but it still deserves a 5/5

Pretty good. I'm not a fan of these kind of poems. I usually don't read them because of organization. That's my pet peeve with poetry reading. But the flow wasn't all that bad. Well you still did a great job! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy