Awww this good keep up the good work cant wait to read more :D

Wow reading your poem almost makes me cry because I use to have that…he…I dunno you are a wonderful guy and a wonderful writer and I love all your poems every single one and who ever your talking about must be so lucky to have you and your old girl….well its her loss and shes probably regretting it. I put you in my favorites keep up the writing XoXo nicole

Oh my gosh i had a relationship like this. it didnt work out tho. you have some really good poems. i feel like you in some ways...about x's and stuff...just when im starting to get over them they come back to me and tell me theyre different. but they never are. i just wanna be happy...you know...well...thanx for the comment and stuff..laterr

Thats I really good poem...I give it a 5! Good Job

Wow that was truly beautiful.. u do have a way with your writting.. it has emotionally got me.. great job.. thanks for the comment on mine as well.. truly appreciate it.. k keep writting! i'd love to check out more of your poems=)
much love.

I like it and thought that it was really sweet. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

I really like this poem and can relate to it, in matter of fact - I like everyone of your poems. Everyone I have read so far I rated a 5/5...keep up the good work...

-Krystal
Check out my poems...theres only a few so far but Im workin on it

This is such a good poem.. i like the idea of it and it really makes me smile. my best friend moved about 6 months ago and we talk on the phone every night he swears we are getting married one day.. i love him so much and his personality and even after 6 months we are still best friends. don't let anything get in the way of you and this girl if its truly meant.. nothing should make you change your mind. good luck! :D

Wow...another great poem...I like the way you put into to words...very good...hope to read more.

: ) that was an adorable poem <33

Absolutly beautiful. You are a great writer, Paul.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

An amazing poem! LOVE IT!!
It is also so sweet.

Sweet poem!! =) 5/5