Giving You

by CoLliN   Jan 8, 2006


Giving you

Giving you my lunch and my breakfast too
Giving you my time and something else too
Giving you so much of me
Giving you something no one gave me

Looking for something that I lost
I’d buy it back but I can’t afford the cost

Giving this a second chance
Giving this kind of poem a second dance
Giving you that third glance

Giving you, giving you and I’m giving you again
Giving you, giving you and I’m still giving you again

Giving you my repetitive words
Giving you my guitar cords

Giving you and I’m giving some more
Giving you and yes I’ll give you that tour

Giving you girl and I can’t seem to give you enough
Giving you something because satisfying is tough

They say I’m sprung or even hooked
They say I hit guys just when they barely look

Giving you attention but you don’t have to worry
Giving you my time but you don’t have to hurry

The truth is…

I really care for you and never want to see you blue
Insist that I shouldn’t but I just can’t help Giving To You

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The wya you reepeated the word giivng, emphasized your point so much, most readers use it too much or not enough or not in the right terms but this was perfect...excellent bro.

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by hi it zonna dont like me stand in line

    I dont hate u so dont pay attenion to my name
    hey it is me brookelyn i wish you can be on a lil more.
    much love
    ohhh way cool poem even though i would hit some sense into for even your breakfast away!!
    that is the most importint meal of the day!!!!!!
    talk later babylove

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    It was great, Collin. I hope you keep up you're great poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by katee

    I thought it was the truth. keep up the good work.

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