I thought it was the truth. keep up the good work.

It was great, Collin. I hope you keep up you're great poetry!

I dont hate u so dont pay attenion to my name
hey it is me brookelyn i wish you can be on a lil more.
much love
ohhh way cool poem even though i would hit some sense into for even your breakfast away!!
that is the most importint meal of the day!!!!!!
talk later babylove

The wya you reepeated the word giivng, emphasized your point so much, most readers use it too much or not enough or not in the right terms but this was perfect...excellent bro.

lissa