That was very powerful. The last line hit me..
"She knows that she is trapped"
it really explains how i feel at the moment. Thank you for commenting.
:)Smile:)

Hey i thought it was really well written, just one question, im gonna sound like an idiot, but what was it about, i got the feeling that it had to do with either a nightmare or guilt. Please write back and tell me because i really enjoyed it.

Thats really well written, i can feel the emotion in it.
take care of yourself x0x0

Wow!that was so good!loved it!and thanks so much for your nice and helping words.....i can so relate to this poem...take care love JoSiE....

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a very deep i enjoyed reading, 5/5, nice job!