Awww... i"m sorry your skies are no longer blue (i love that line!). this poem sounds really heartfelt... gr8 job!

I like this poem..i especially like this part:

**You taught me how to live
You taught me how to cry
You taught me how to smile
Just not how to say goodbye**

thats just...pimp...but yea all of your poems are good...so..good job-
lauren

Hey i really like your poem its really good i made me think of my recent break up but i put things in perpective
you are a good poet

Hey i really like your poem its really good i made me think of my recent break up but i put things in perpective
you are a good poet

Omg... t his is one of the saddest and most heartfelt poems that I've ever read. I'm so sorry for your pain, hun... it sounds devistating... if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm always here. I hope you're okay. Well I just wanted to tell you that your poem is incredible, and I hope you continue writing.

Yes it is a really long poem but i think that it is great, It tells a story. I really think that you have great talent. Great job!
~Dani~

AWWWW! This is a really beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Its a definite 5/5! Keep writing because you are really talented.

This is a GREAT poem! I enjoyed reading it! I can relate sooo much!

Omg this was an awesomee poem..it made me think alot..to back what i had..and im soo sorry that you have to go through this i have an idea how it feels..and if u need to talk i can email me at summababii78@yahoo.com and please read my poems..

-allison

I felt all the emotion coming from this...almost made me cry cause it made me rethink of all the times with that certain guy.. loved it! 5/5