by Shawn Jan 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The love from your soul is inhaled deeply into the depths of my heart. Tears from my heart shower over my feelings making me careful about what I do. The warm gaze from your eyes covers me protectively like a mother over her young. The constant stream of confidence makes me so proud just to say you're mine. Your beautiful,soft voice flows against my ears like velvet, your lips like fresh roses, eyes a sea of blue. Still images of us stand silently over my head, waiting to live yet again. True feelings pass through the air, gaining on negative thoughts at all times but to be happy we must fight through the love lust and lies. I must tell you I love you over a million times and time spent explains how our fate lies.I've finally learned love is life's greatest burden but is often taken for granted, but for me to have you means somewhere the sky parted, With the way I feel,I'm always at a loss for words,therefor when you are near, I'm silent for hours...I love you! |
by seans baby
Wow that is great All of your poems are great im trying to get the ones up from the break up but I never have time cuz I get side tracked there my best work but anyways keep it up boo |
by sarah
Thanks for the comment back...it means a lot. I've been writing for a bout 10 months now...there not the greatest thing ever but it seems to help me express feelings thats why I always love any feedback that anyone wants to offer. your work is really good too |
by sarah
This is an EXCELLENT poem! Its well written and I can really relate! Good Job! |