This is an EXCELLENT poem! Its well written and I can really relate! Good Job!

Thanks for the comment back...it means a lot. I've been writing for a bout 10 months now...there not the greatest thing ever but it seems to help me express feelings thats why I always love any feedback that anyone wants to offer. your work is really good too

Wow that is great All of your poems are great im trying to get the ones up from the break up but I never have time cuz I get side tracked there my best work but anyways keep it up boo
One love boo nicole