Broken Hearted Fairytale

by xDryTearsx   Jan 9, 2006


Depression
Will soon be written
Upon the scars
Of her own body.
A smile
Soon to fade
Into the shape
In which creates a frown.
A heart
To be broken
In two
Tatter and torn.
Tears
Will burn her emotions
Till there`s nothing
Left of her.
Sorrowed eyes
Will tell the tale
Of a broken hearted girl
With nothing left to lose.
Their love
Forced apart
A million miles
From what they
Once held close.
Fate
Tangled in deceit
From the boy
Who stole her heart
From the first hello
And took it with him
At the last goodbye.
Her fairytale
Lost the meaning
Of the once to be
Happily ever after.

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Beautifully written. Keep it up. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, expressed yourself very well

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey i loved this poem. expressed thoughts very well. You're a very talented poet and this one i can totally relate to. Thanks for reading my poem. That was very kind of you. very appreciated :)

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