Comments : As I Slip From Life's Grips

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Excellent rhyme scheme, nice flow.And filled with such meaning and emotion.We all tend to wear a mask, put on a front of who we think we are or who we think others think we should be.But beware, for given time, the mask becomes the face itself.Who you are or want to be comes from the changes within, and you have the power to do that.