by Bill Turner
Sad, heartfelt and sorrowful. Beautifully written...take care...It does get better... |
by melissa
WOW this is wonderful.i can definately relate to this one. i know how you feel.stay strong and it will get better.5/5 |
by dora
0h sweetie. this was really sad. =( a very t0uching piece. im here f0r u. very heartfelt. stay str0ng hun h0pe things w0rk 0ut f0r u!! |
by Simon Hayes
WOW! This is deep... Very heart breaking. Beautifully written. Keep smiling, what's yours is never lost - and that would be your heart, your soul, your love! |
Wow mami I just want to let you kno that Im here for you, I know what it feels like to be cheated on...and my man pick another too. It hurts like hell, but mami you WILL be alright. Things will work out one way or the other. I hope you feel better soon, and wow th epoem was great. You did really good on it. Hugs and Kisses... |
Awwwwwwww |
by Tammi
Wow I love it and I feel ur pain for I 2 have been there and it will get better so ppl tell me but I dont know for I still feel pain so keep ur chin up and dont give in 5/5 |
by Shane
Depressingly terrific. |
Wow...i feel exactly the same wayyyyy...wow...i love this poem...i really do...great job with the wordz... |
AMAZING!!! |
by obsessedgurl
Wow i love this poem and all the rest of yours! thanx 4 the comments! |
by cLumsy
Whatever you're going through, i hope you'll make it, because a talented poet like you shouldn't stop. the rhythm flows gently and the poem itself is beautiful. 5/5 |
by JAY Poet
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so great i loved it so much it made me cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow |
by Ann Stareyes
So heartfelt and touching....take care sweetie... |
by Torn
This is an awesome poem huni.. |
by Samantha
Awe huni.. i'm so sorry your feeling that way... that guy is a jerk for doin that to you!!!!!!!! you deserve much better! beautiful poem by the way.. as always you continue to amaze me... keep it up! |
Again I know how ya feel!! Great poem! |
by Angie
Heartfelt, emotional and touching. Beautifully written. |
by Ali
So so sad......breaks my heart... |
by stacy
I love your poem it like touched me. There's definatly something about it that moves me WoW good job |