Daddy Why?

by Shawn   Jan 9, 2006


Daddy what happen to us
so happy at one time
but now we cant hold a conversation
so tell me...daddy why

fists touching my face
with no amount of grace
blood flows softly down
mommy cant protect me now

my father tells me I'm not his
robbing my life of so much bliss
but i try to hold on yet its so...
unexplainable how I loved you so

so please make me understand
you hurt me did you try
to make me understand
answer me...Daddy Why

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  • 18 years ago

    by John Fleece

    I know how it feels

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Awww thats such a SAD poem! It's very well written tho...good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Good ending and so sad. you're so good at expressing yourself. keep
    it up.
    have a great day,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    That was beautiful in its sadness. I love the way it was written. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Aww, that's so sad! i hope it's not true, but if it is, stay strong. um, yeah, i appreciated your comments, and all of my poems are true unless i say it's not in the poem. as for your other question, i've been writing since last year. anyways, excellent poem, 5/5. keep up the good work.
    **lisa**

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