So wrong

by Shawn   Jan 9, 2006


Doesnt rhyme or anything but...

death doesn't scare me
death should fear me
i hate death
but death loves me
death takes my friends
death takes my foes
death even took me
death knocked at the door
death...death cheated me

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  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, short but...to the point. i think it's amazing that you expressed your emotions in so little words. excellent job. 5/5.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by seans baby

    Wow some times you take the words out my mouth i got a new poem tell me how it is

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawn

    Thanks!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I rearlly love it its short but really good
    #slient eyes#

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Wow, what a touching and powerfull poem.
    very good
    keep writing, youve got skill! 5/5
    xoxoxox
    *`mary~*

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