See what u have done???

by PURE HEART   Jan 9, 2006


I wish i could be what i was,
u are the reason and no other cause.
you have broken my heart into two,
sorry not only mine, but my friends' too.

i used to laugh, giggle and cheer,
with all my near and dear.
but see what u have done to me...
they talk to themselves as they do not find me.

i used to be there always for them,
standing with them in every trend.
but see what u have done to me...
they look around themselves as they do not find me.

i used to share my feelings with all,
they seem to be eager whenever i call.
but see what u have done to me...
now they share among themselves as they do not find me.

i used to thank GOD for whatever i had,
HE helped me out whenever i used to be sad.
but see wat u have done to me...
now HE waits for my prayer as HE does not find me in me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great wrk, keep writing hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie Mclellan

    Nice one bharti, i love reading your poems, i have to give this one 5/5 of course. keep writing and posting. ill try to get more poems up on mine when i started thinking:P
    bye bye

    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice one bharti, you write very touching poems. 5/5 of course, Keep writing and posting and do get in touch when u get time!

    Amit

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Nice... I loved the ending... Keep up the good work...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow!! that was somewhat dark and thats something i didn't xpected from u..but just look at the way u wrote this one....amazing dear..this was just toooo deep. lovely piece of work for sure.

    this one just shocked me 2 b honest & as u know i love dark poems...this one is certainly the best poem i hv had from u.

    all the best forever!!

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